Brokenkit- Senior Kit

[whitespot]

Name:: Brokenkit
Age:: 6 Moons
Gender:: She-cat
Rank: Kit
Appearance:

Being a very young cat, there is not much to say about Brokenkit. Brokenkit as a vivid pink under-tone beneath her snowy white pelt. Brokenkit does not have a very built frame and build, being born and bred in two-leg nests. The top of Brokenkit's head, ears, and her tail are all a very pretty gray color, not too dark. Her eyes are a neutral, sensitive yellow, which follow most things with curiousity. Althought young, Brokenkit has at least two-inch long white whiskers, and small, sharp little thorn-claws. All of Brokenkit's claws are translucent white. Her nose is outlined in maroon, but kit-pink in the middle. Brokenkit's legs are thick and stumbly, as are her paws. She has never really had to do anything, so her muscles are weak, and stiff.

Personality:

Brokenkit was actually a mean kit before she lost her memory. She was always in trouble, and her parents were always scolding her. It never sunk through. After losing her memory, Brokenkit became very timid, and shy. She likes to help, and doesn't talk much. She does whatever she is told to do without much complaint, and is happy to be alive. She seems almost crazy calm, sometimes depressed. Brokenkit loves to watch the stars at night, and wishes to become a Medicine cat when she grows up.

History:

Brokenkit, really, has no idea what her past was like, and it can be depressing sometimes. She doesn't know who her parents are, who her kin is. Nothing. This is because when she was 4 moons old she snuck out of camp and slipped in a river. The kit bumped her head, and lost all of her memories.

The warriors of the camp say she was picked up out of their territory, almost drowned in the river, and in pretty bad shape. So, it seems like she isn't even from Waterclan.

In the last moon, little Brokenkit has met and fallin in love with one of the other kits, just turned apprentice. It seems that he feels the same, and she wants to be with him always.

'He is .. the other piece of me.'

RP Example:

This is Whitespot, from another site.

Whitespot listened patiently to Falconpaw. When he was done, she simply said, "Starclan only made it clear that they would teach me to become a Medicine cat. They did not say I was supposed to be here. Did not say I had to be here. I came here because I wanted to, just like you."

Whitespot tried to inch closer to the apprentice inconspiciously, without realizing that she was doing it. This was a weird relationship building here, but she made no move to stop it. It was a wonderful feeling, being beside Falconpaw. It was not uncomfortable anymore, it felt almost right. The only thing that penitrated her concentration on him was whether or not he felt the same.

Only one way to find out. She would have to voice her feelings. Ugh.

Other Cats: none
Other:: Like to Apply for Medicine Cat Apprentice

[~ Resonance]

one more sentence in your RP example ^^

[whitespot]

Why, it has twelve sentences, like i was told to have. Did you count the last one?
'Only one way to find out.'?

[.::ئhatterstaՐ::.]

It's still only 11. The 'This si Whitespot, form another site' doesn't count.

[whitespot]

There.

[∂εstΐŋy]

Accepted!
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